Lesson 2 · 22 min

Narrative

Hebrew narrative shows and refuses to tell. The narrator reports adultery, murder and massacre without adding an adjective, which means a reader who mistakes report for approval will read the Bible as endorsing things it is quietly prosecuting.

When Uriah's wife heard that her husband was dead, she mourned for him. And when the time of mourning was over, David had her brought to his house, and she became his wife and bore him a son. But the thing that David had done was evil in the sight of the LORD.

2 Samuel 11:26-27 · BSB

Before you read

Work these first, with the passage open and the lesson unread. Write your answers down. The exposition below is what you check them against, not what you copy them from.

  1. Observe

    Read 2 Samuel 11:1-5. Write down every action David performs, in order, and then write down where David is and where he is supposed to be. Use the text's own verbs and add nothing.

  2. Notice

    Now hunt through all of 2 Samuel 11 for any sentence in which the narrator tells you what to think about what David has done. Count them, note where in the chapter each one falls, and then compare the wording of anything you find with David's message to Joab in 11:25.

  3. Hear it then

    Read 2 Samuel 11:6-13 and build a character sketch of Uriah using only what he does and what he says. Note that he is called Uriah the Hittite, a foreigner in Israel's army, and notice what he refuses and the reason he gives in verse 11.

  4. Find the problem

    Read Judges 19 straight through, then read Judges 21:25. Ask where in Judges 19 the narrator condemns the Levite, and if you cannot find it, ask what the book has done instead to make its judgment land.

  5. Weigh the words

    Using Blue Letter Bible or STEP Bible, free, or Logos if you have it, trace the Hebrew shalach, to send, through 2 Samuel 11 and into 12:1. Count its occurrences and note who is doing the sending each time, especially the last time.

  6. Show the evidence

    Someone argues that when scripture reports an action without condemning it, the text approves it. Test that claim against a specific narrative: Judges 19, or Genesis 16, or Genesis 19:30-38. Cite chapter and verse and say what the narrator does and does not say.

  7. Why it matters

    Think of a sermon or lesson you have heard on an Old Testament story that ended with 'be like' or 'do not be like' the main character. Write three sentences on what that reading gained and what it may have lost, and be ready to defend your answer from the passage itself.

1. A narrator who will not help you

Hebrew narrative is the most reticent storytelling in ancient literature. The narrator knows everything, including what God is thinking, and tells you almost nothing. There is no description of what anyone looks like unless it matters to the plot. There is no interior monologue unless the text chooses to open a character's mind, and when it does, it is an event. There are almost no adjectives of moral evaluation. Erich Auerbach, comparing Genesis 22 with Homer in the opening chapter of Mimesis (1946), put it in a phrase that has never been improved on: biblical narrative is 'fraught with background'. Homer lays everything in the foreground, lit and explained. Genesis leaves the lit surface thin and the depths unspoken.

This is not primitive writing. It is a technique, and it has consequences the writer intends. Because the narrator will not evaluate, you have to. Meir Sternberg, in The Poetics of Biblical Narrative (1985), called the result a drama of reading: the text withholds, the reader fills the gap, the text later supplies information that exposes how the reader filled it. You are not a spectator of the story's moral world; you are being examined in it.

Four devices carry most of the weight. First, characterization by action and speech alone. You learn who someone is by watching them choose and listening to them talk, exactly as in life. Second, repetition. Hebrew prose is built on a chain of narrative verb forms, the wayyiqtol, which makes repeated words and phrases stand out sharply. When the same word recurs five times in a chapter it is not poor style, it is highlighting. Third, gaps. Robert Alter and Sternberg both stress that what the text declines to tell you is chosen as carefully as what it tells you, and that some gaps are meant to stay open. Fourth, what Alter named the type-scene: a recurring situation with a fixed set of elements, such as the meeting of a future bride at a well, so that each new instance is read against the pattern and the variations carry the meaning.

The two standard literary references are Robert Alter, The Art of Biblical Narrative (1981), and Sternberg's Poetics. Alter is the one to read first; it is short, written for the general reader, and every chapter gives you something usable by the weekend. Sternberg is denser and more theoretical, and repays the effort if you intend to teach this. Both are literary critics rather than theologians, and both write about the Hebrew Bible as literature that rewards the same attention you would give to a great novel. Neither is a substitute for historical or theological work, and neither claims to be.

2. Report is not approval

This is the single most consequential rule in the lesson, and Judges 19 makes it unmissable. A Levite's concubine is handed over to a mob, abused all night, found at the door in the morning, loaded onto a donkey, taken home, and cut into twelve pieces. The narrator reports every step in the same flat, unhurried tone used for the journey up from Bethlehem. Not one word of condemnation is offered. There is no 'and this was an abomination'. The Levite is given the last word in the chapter's aftermath and he lies about his own conduct.

A reader who assumes the Bible condemns what it disapproves of, in the sentence where it reports it, will read that chapter and conclude either that scripture is indifferent to the woman or that it approves the Levite. Both conclusions are wrong, and the text has the resources to show it. The book of Judges has a refrain, and it lands twice in the closing chapters, most starkly at 21:25: 'In those days there was no king in Israel; everyone did what was right in his own eyes.' That is the frame the editor has built around these chapters, and it is a verdict on all of them. Beyond the refrain, the horror does its own work. The plain report is the argument. Phyllis Trible's Texts of Terror (1984) made the case, and made the name stick, that reading these chapters slowly and refusing to look away is itself a faithful act of interpretation rather than an attack on scripture.

So how does a narrator who does not comment nevertheless pass judgment? Four ways, and you should learn to look for all four. One, the rare evaluative clause, which is rare precisely so that it detonates: 'But the thing that David had done was evil in the sight of the LORD.' Two, outcome. The story shows you where the choice leads, sometimes over many chapters, as with Abram and Hagar in Genesis 16. Three, narrative analogy: the text places two episodes side by side or echoes the wording of one in the other so that each interprets the other. Four, the speech of a character the narrative has established as reliable, which is how Nathan functions in 2 Samuel 12.

None of these is as convenient as an adjective would be, and that is the point. The Bible's storytellers do not tell you what to feel about Jacob, Samson, Jephthah or David. They make you decide, and then they show you what the decision was worth.

3. Working it: 2 Samuel 11 and 12

Start with verse 1, because the indictment begins before the sin. 'In the spring, at the time when kings march out to war, David sent out Joab and his servants with the whole army of Israel. They destroyed the Ammonites and besieged Rabbah, but David remained in Jerusalem.' The narrator has told you what kings do at this time of year, and then, in the last clause, that this king did not do it. He sent. The verb shalach, to send, becomes the chapter's signature: David sends Joab, sends to inquire about the woman, sends messengers to take her, sends to Joab for Uriah, sends Uriah back with a letter, sends a message about the sword. This is a king who has stopped going and started sending, and the chapter's whole moral geography is in that shift.

Watch the characterization. Uriah is called the Hittite, a foreigner. He appears for eight verses and the narrator never calls him good. You assemble it yourself from what he says in verse 11: 'The ark and Israel and Judah are dwelling in tents, and my master Joab and his soldiers are camped in the open field.' He will not go home to eat and drink and sleep with his wife while the ark is in the field. The foreigner is keeping the covenant that the anointed king of Israel has abandoned, and the contrast is never stated. Notice as well that Uriah, twice invited to go down to his house, refuses even when drunk, which is the narrator's way of telling you the plan failed on the strength of the man's character rather than by accident.

Now the gap. Bathsheba speaks once in the whole chapter, three words in English and two in Hebrew: 'I am pregnant.' The narrator gives her no interiority at all. Readers have filled that silence in opposite directions for centuries, some treating her bathing as seduction, most recent readers pointing out that the text gives her no choice in the matter and that the grammar makes David the agent of every verb. The honest thing to say is that the text withholds her motives, that a reader who supplies them is supplying them, and that the chapter's evaluative clause names only one culprit: the thing that David had done. Sternberg's point applies here with force. The gap is doing work, and closing it too quickly tells you more about the reader than about Bathsheba.

Then the hinge, and it is a two-word change of subject. Every act of sending in chapter 11 originates with David or is his instrument. Chapter 12 verse 1 begins: 'Then the LORD sent Nathan to David.' The sender is now being sent to. And Nathan does not accuse. He tells a story: a rich man with many flocks, a poor man with one lamb he loved, and a guest to feed. David, the reader of stories, does exactly what the narrator has been training you to do for a chapter. He evaluates. 'As surely as the LORD lives, the man who did this deserves to die! Because he has done this thing and has shown no pity, he must pay for the lamb four times over.' Then Nathan says, 'You are that man!'

This is the most important structural fact in the two chapters. The narrator has spent 2 Samuel 11 refusing to judge David, and then puts the judgment in David's own mouth by handing him a parable. The reticence was not indifference; it was a trap, and the trap closes from inside the story. The technique is worth naming for your own teaching: a narrative that refuses to moralise can get a verdict out of a hearer that no moralising sermon could. Two further details reward attention. David's sentence includes fourfold restitution, and readers going back to antiquity have noticed that four of David's sons die violently or early in the chapters that follow, though the text never draws the line for you, and you should mark the difference between an observation a reader makes and a claim the text asserts. And David's confession in 12:13, 'I have sinned against the LORD', is two words in Hebrew, Nathan's word of forgiveness arrives in the same verse, and the child still dies. The narrator sets forgiveness and consequence side by side and leaves them there.

4. Described, prescribed, and the argument about the difference

A narrative describes what happened. The question that divides careful readers is when, and how, a description also prescribes. Nobody thinks Genesis 16 recommends surrogacy by concubine, or that Judges 11 recommends Jephthah's vow. Equally, nobody thinks the story of Abraham's obedience in Genesis 22 is morally neutral reportage. So the line exists; the argument is about where.

Three things can be said with confidence. First, a narrative's theological claim is usually about God rather than about the human characters. The exodus narrative is not primarily teaching you to be like Moses; it is telling you what this God does about slaves. Read for the protagonist and you will find the protagonist is God more often than not. Second, where a narrator supplies an evaluation, take it as the text's own, because they are scarce. Third, where a later biblical writer picks up a narrative and draws a lesson from it, you have inspired interpretive precedent to work with, as Hebrews 11 does with Genesis and 1 Corinthians 10 does with the wilderness. That does not license you to invent lessons of the same kind at will, but it tells you the operation is legitimate.

Where it stays genuinely contested is whether narrative on its own establishes normative practice. Gordon Fee has argued at length, in the essays collected in Gospel and Spirit and in How to Read the Bible for All Its Worth, that historical precedent in narrative has normative force only where the author's intention to teach it can be shown, and that otherwise a repeated pattern in Acts is description rather than rule. Against that, Roger Stronstad in The Charismatic Theology of St Luke (1984) and others have argued that Luke is a theologian as well as a historian, that he teaches through the shape of his narrative as deliberately as Paul teaches through argument, and that a hermeneutic which can only hear didactic material has decided in advance that the largest genre in scripture cannot teach doctrine. The debate is usually fought over Acts and the Spirit, but the principle is wider, and it touches church order, patterns of prayer, and how far the practices of the earliest church bind the church now. I am not going to adjudicate it here. What is worth noticing is that the strongest version of each position concedes something to the other, Fee granting that Luke shapes his narrative theologically and Stronstad granting that not every reported event is a template.

One practical consequence for teaching. The quickest way to abuse a biblical story is to reduce it to a character to imitate, because it puts you at the centre of a text whose subject is God, and because it forces you to smooth over the parts of the character the narrator deliberately left rough. The slower and better way is to ask what the narrator did: what was repeated, what was withheld, what was evaluated, and what the arrangement of the material argues. Those four questions will get you further into 2 Samuel 11 than any amount of moral application, and they are questions a student with nothing but a Bible and a notebook can ask.

Key terms

wayyiqtolHebrew
The chained verb form that carries the main line of Hebrew narrative prose, conventionally rendered 'and he did'. Because the chain is so uniform, any repeated word or broken pattern stands out to a Hebrew ear.
Type-sceneEnglish
Robert Alter's term for a recurring narrative situation with fixed elements, such as meeting a bride at a well or the annunciation of a birth to a barren woman. Meaning is carried by how a given instance departs from the pattern.
Descriptive and prescriptiveEnglish
The distinction between what a story reports and what it requires. Hebrew narrative reports atrocity without comment, so the two must be separated before any application is attempted.
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Knowledge check

In 2 Samuel 11 the narrator offers no moral comment until the final clause of the chapter. What does the lesson argue that reticence accomplishes?